Nurul
H Sading
Class
VI A
Students
should not work while they are going to school
Introduction:
Thesis
statement: High school students should not work part time
while they are going to school because they will get several disadvantages.
Body
of essay:
I.
The main point of those disadvantages is
they will not concentrate to their school.
II.
Another disadvantage is they cannot join
in extracurricular activity if they do work.
III.
The last disadvantage is they will not
have leisure in their teens to play with their peers.
Conclusion:
As has been noted, there are several disadvantages
that can be happening to you if you were a high school student which has your
own job out of study. There will be bad impacts that can be appear of your
study process. Instead of it, you can get the limited time because a half of
your time off used to work. Likewise, you can lose your leisure time to enjoy
with your friends. The facts showed those disadvantages. As a result, it might
be strong reason, being a student who has his own job is not good idea. The
best way is students have to give full concentration, time, and passion to
their study to get the success.
Nurul
H Sading
Class
VI A
Writing
III
Sat,
March 23, 2013
Students
should not work while they are going to school
Being a man who has two or more
things to do in the same time is complicated. Moreover, it happens to students
whom still on teens. They have not stabiles thinking yet. In brief, they cannot
balance both activities among study and work. In my view, high school students
should not work part time while they are going to school because they will get
several disadvantages. They are not ready to face it in their ages, so that, they
get it as a problem.
The main point of those
disadvantages is they will not concentrate to their study. Because they have
another thing to do and it will get their attention. As a consequence, many
problems come to them. Such as, they can lose their grade, they think into two
things among work and study which will attract their attention that it supposed
to be only on study, or they become lazy to study and will give their mind and
energy to work. In fact, some students cannot manage their time while they have
another job instead of their main activity as a student.
Another disadvantage is they cannot join in
extracurricular activity if they do work. Here is the thing; not only they
cannot increase their talent, potential, and ability but also they cannot get
any experiences if they are not participating in extracurricular activity.
Extracurricular is the place of student which cans development a positive thing
to progress themselves. If they give participate in extracurricular activity
they will get some new friends, they will get more self-confidence, and they
used to being sociable person.
The last disadvantage is they will not have leisure
in their teens to play with their peers. This is most common case that I
realize happen if high school students have worked. By way of illustration, they
lose quality time with their own friends. It means, they will have small social
relationship in the society. They have not a good time to do pleasure things in
their teens, and they often have not time off to go on vacation.
As has been noted, there are several disadvantages
that can be happening to you if you were a high school student which has your
own job out of study. There will be bad impacts that can be appear of your
study process. Instead of it, you can get the limited time because a half of
your time off used to work. Likewise, you can lose your leisure time to enjoy
with your friends. The facts showed those disadvantages. As a result, it might
be strong reason, being a student who has his own job is not good idea. The
best way is students have to give full concentration, time, and passion to
their study to get the success.
